[Carowinds44]

Trev,

I like what you've got but:

Vortex: after the corkscrew, you have a left turn before going back through the corkscrew, it should be a right turn and back through.

Cyclone: Fix that long straight run after the corkscrews.

TR: Im not sure why you have such a gigantic turnaround.

Hurler: Try to thin it up a little. Its way to long before the first drop.

Good start, lets see TG and Borg.

[Trev32]

Trev,

I like what you've got but:

Vortex: after the corkscrew, you have a left turn before going back through the corkscrew, it should be a right turn and back through.

Cyclone: Fix that long straight run after the corkscrews.

TR: Im not sure why you have such a gigantic turnaround.

Hurler: Try to thin it up a little. Its way to long before the first drop.

Good start, lets see TG and Borg.

For TR:it's so i can fit <a href='http://www.rcdb.com/installationgallery84.htm?Picture=2' target='_blank'>That Hill</a> that's going diagonal after the turn, you know how rct2 is , but i'll see what i can do.


Cyclone: that straightaway is so i can get the helix in the right spot


Vortex: after the turnaround i made it go to the left beccause the corkscrew in real life is diagonal, so i turned it that way to make it a little more realistic

Hurler: do you mean make the first turnaround smaller so it make it a bit skinnier?? i'll try to fix it.




EDIT: here are my borg and top gun recreations, they aren't very good but it's the best i can do,

<a href='http://img7.photobucket.com/albums/v17/Trev32/SCR21.bmp' target='_blank'>BORG</a>


<a href='http://img7.photobucket.com/albums/v17/Trev32/SCR20.bmp' target='_blank'>Top Gun</a>

[Carowinds44]

On hurler, after it climbs the hill and turns before it drops, thin up that turn.

[coasterbrian]

Hey Trev, I think your recreation of thunder road is actually quite good. However, try to clean up Vortex a little, it looks really funky.
(And yes, I know RCT2 is a pain in the butt)

[Carowinds44]

Im trying this webshots thing again and hoping that I can keep my pictures on this time.

Check them out, they're new and show pretty much the final product. I only have some minor things to finish.

Let me know.

<a href='http://community.webshots.com/user/nygiantsfan44' target='_blank'>http://community.webshots.com/user/nygiantsfan44</a>

[Carowindsman]

Lets see here from all your screens

1.Entrance Looks Good but the Fountain is bigger but its not really a big thing
2.From The Pic It Looks Like you have a vertical piece right before you go above the station but if its not then its ok
3.Lets see For Borg The Walk way is directly under the lift the station is metal instead of wood and those footers really degrade it sorry to say
4.Cyclone and Richochet is not much to say really
5.Hurlers Station is White with Black top and Stan Mikitas doesnt have Stan anymore lol
6.Saturator is fine since i messed mine up
7.Water Works is Straight
8.Thunder Road is Straight
9.AFX is Straight To
10.Top Gun the Corkscrew and on is Totally Wrong
11.Scooby Doo is Scooby Doo
12.Taxi Jam is good but the Queue is wrong
13.Thornberrys is good
14.Layout is Wrong on RRR but its good i noticed reptar lol
15.and this is ok to


So There You Go The Real Critiquing will begin when i get the download is it for RCT2, WW, or TT and it better be for RCT2 not the other 2 lol

[Jonathan]

^ Wait, what? Stan Makita is gone?

[Carowinds44]

I used the expansion packs for my rec. Sorry if you don't have them. If you know somewhat that does, ask to borrow them and install them, because once they are installed you only need the RCT2 disc.

After the corkscrew on TG is a helix, in shape, not the actual helix that is written as a helix in the game.

Im not sure what you are talking about here:

2.From The Pic It Looks Like you have a vertical piece right before you go above the station but if its not then its ok
3.Lets see For Borg The Walk way is directly under the lift the station is metal instead of wood

Thanks for the comments. And i know my reptar will never compare to yours lol.

[Trev32]

here are my comments

1. the entrance looks great!!
2.after the corkscrew on vortex it's kinda funky looking(but it isn't a big deal, that is one hard coaster to recreate)
3.GREAT job on borg!! it looks almost just like it!
4. nice job on FSS, the layout is about identical.
5.good job on the waterpark so far.
6.good job on thunder road,exept it goes a little further out of the station.
7.great job on the theater.
8.nice job on top gun.
9.nice job on scooby
10. great job on taxi.
11. i like reptar, those supports for the helix must be hard to get right.

[Carowinds44]

6.good job on thunder road,exept it goes a little further out of the station.

Not sure what you are talking about here.

How would you like me to fix vortex after the corkscrew?

And Carowindsman: Stan isn't gone. What made you think that?

[Carowindsman]

o no i was thinking of something else i was actually thinking about another Paramount Park

[Carowinds44]

I've added 3 more pics for everyone.

Fixed and finally correct Reptar
Borg with its new concrete bases, since no one liked the old ones lol.
Overview of the whole thing.

Let me know what you think.

<a href='http://community.webshots.com/user/nygiantsfan44' target='_blank'>http://community.webshots.com/user/nygiantsfan44</a>

[Trev32]

Not sure what you are talking about here.

How would you like me to fix vortex after the corkscrew?

for thunder road i mean it dosen't turn and drop it drops a little goes straight for a sec then does a much wider turn. it dosen't to a tight turning drop.



and for vortex after the corkscrew it dosen't do a 270° turn then a 180° diving turn, it goes up i litlle, turns 180° then goes down and through the corkscrew, but it isn't a ig deal vortex is one of the hardest coasters to recreate in RCT2.

[Cephas]

Looks awesome! Here are my major comments

Put a straight lift on Taxi (if you can)

Waterpark took my breath away

TG is awesome

TR is awesome

You need to work on turning the cyclone and CB around 90 degrees (that's your park's only flaw)

[Carowindsman]

ok the new screens

-For borg they still dont look good sorry to say
-Reptar is straight but i dont remember it having a mid course brake
-The Overview looks great just some stuff here and there

Now all i have to do is just find somebody who can give me the other expansions to check this really out